logo logo Menu Bar

AutoCrit Blog


When to Use Whom in Your Writing

It’s a favorite correction of those with impeccable grammar knowledge, yet it’s still widely misunderstood by writers and readers of the English language all over the world…

When should you use who, and when should you use whom?

First, a little history: The word who derives from the Old English hwā, which was commonly used to denote people. Frustratingly, the word human, even though it sounds like a natural succession of hwā, actually stems from the Latin homo. Later, as Latin speaking cultures mingled with Old English, the words melted together.

Hundreds of years ago, who and whom were just as close yet distinct as they’re and their. The Oxford English Dictionary has traced mistakes back to the 15th century, while Jespersen cites even earlier examples from Chaucer.

But in 1975, S. Potter wrote in Changing English that ‘nearly half a century ago Edward Sapir predicted the demise of “whom”, showing at great length that it was doomed because it was “psychologically isolated” from the objective pronouns me, us, him, her, them on the one hand, and the invariables which, what, that and where, when, how, why on the other.’

Simply put, whom didn’t have a gender or a definitive object all of its own, and that’s why it was never that much of a priority to use correctly – it was always something of a blank slate.

By 1978, the ‘who vs. whom’ debate had become so messy that even the Oxford English Dictionary had almost given up: According to the 2nd Edition in 1989, whom is ‘no longer current in natural colloquial speech.’

Today, of course, most people scratch their heads when you ask them when to use whom – so what’s the real answer?

Well, according to traditional prescriptive grammar, who is only subjective, whereas whom is objective. Think him versus he.

It’s as simple as that.

You can actually figure out when to use whom by using a simple test: Ask yourself if the sentence is referring to someone as the subject – the person who is taking the action.

So, for example, you could ask: Who ate the cookies?

If the answer is that he or she did it (the person is the subject), use who.

On the other hand, if your question needs to be phrased in such a way that the person becomes the object – a situation where the answer would be him or her – then use whom.

Here are some examples:

 

CORRECT USE OF ‘WHO’:

Who would like a burrito?

Who made these awesome burritos?

 

INCORRECT USE OF ‘WHO’:

Who should I write about?

To who was the email sent?

 

CORRECT USE OF ‘WHOM’:

Whom do you believe?

I do not know with whom I will have dinner.

 

INCORRECT USE OF ‘WHOM’:

Whom ate my burrito?

Whom needs a ride?

 

Sometimes, you’ll get a problem with a sentence like this: ‘Shakespeare, who you say was a great writer, wrote mostly plays and sonnets.’

The use of who in that statement is grammatically correct, and you’d be wrong if you said that this was when to use ‘whom’, since the pronoun is the subject of was, not the object of say. (One would write ‘you say [that] he [not him] was a great composer.’)

Nevertheless, whom is quite commonly used in sentences like this, and you might find people fiercely defend such uses.

This could be because of sentences like this: ‘Shakespeare, whom you believe (or whom you believe to be) a great writer, wrote mostly plays and sonnets.’ In that case, whom is used correctly according to traditional grammar rules, since it is now the object of the verb believe. (You’d write ‘you believe him [not he] (to be) a great composer.’)

There’s a word for this behavior: Hypercorrection. When someone who is attentive to grammar hears the first sentence, they may perceive the need to correct who to whom because it isn’t very easy to distinguish between the two sentences unless you’re listening intently. Your mind automatically fills in the intended meaning, not the language used.

So, to summarize, who is subjective and you should use it if you can replace it with he or she, whilst whom is entirely objective and is to be used when you can replace it with him or her

But, as always, there can sometimes be a sting in the tail waiting for you. If in any doubt about when to use whom, just use who as long as comprehension doesn’t suffer.

After all, our language is constantly evolving – and shows little sign of slowing down.

What do you think? Do you avoid wrestling with whom like you’d avoid an encounter with a rabid bear – or can you just not resist that sophisticated feel the former offers? Have your say in the comments!


The Secret Formula to Publishing a Best-Selling Novel Cover


How to Consistently Produce Books Your Readers Adore... Without Spending Weeks on Heavy Editing!

Join our newsletter today and we'll send you our free guide, including:

  • – The "secret formula" behind best-selling novels that you can use to polish yours in record time – whether you're self-publishing or taking the traditional route.

  • – Your complete guide to self editing – so you know exactly what to tweak, step by step, to easily meet the standards that sell... before your book has even landed on your editor's desk!
  • By entering your details, you'll opt in to receive regular email updates from AutoCrit. But don't worry – you may unsubscribe at any time.

    Join the Discussion on “When to Use Whom in Your Writing”

    1. Maureen Ross says:

      My protagonist/antagonist would tell me to ‘whom off’ and I would! Anybody know a word for a character who, not whom, is both protagonist and antagonist, depending on her mood?

      1. AutoCrit says:

        Ha! There probably is one somewhere–and if not, you need to invent a good one!

    2. Forrest Steele says:

      My opinion is that the word “Say” and “believe” function exactly the same. You had to insert some words that you seem to believe or implied in the second instance, but I think if you look carefully you’ll see your contortions.

    3. Forrest Steele says:

      Hoops, a couple of wrong words in my previous post! Blame it on voice-to text and failure to proof.

      1. AutoCrit says:

        Will do–your secret is safe with me (well, and the other readers of this blog!)

    4. Mary Sadler says:

      I never have a problem with who/whom – it’s all about feeling right.

      1. AutoCrit says:

        As writers, I think we definitely want to follow rules, but context and characterization can certainly come into play in fiction writing, especially in dialogue.

    5. Eric Butler says:

      This is an interesting article. But I think whether to use Who or Whom would depend on your character/voice. Is your character a grammar snob? Then he or she would probably use Whom all the time when its proper to do so. Otherwise, your character probably doesn’t care and would sound weird if he or she used it. Perhaps though, as a narrator, it would be proper to use the correct language.

      But like you said, as long as comprehension doesn’t suffer.

      1. AutoCrit says:

        This could definitely play into characterization in your story.

    6. While these rules have always been quite clear to me, I sometimes use “who” in dialogue in cases where “whom” should be used but would sound too pretentious or out of character. Yet it bothers me, and often I will rephrase the sentence so that there is no grammatical error!

      1. AutoCrit says:

        I think that’s a very common thing to do, especially if your friends know you’re a writer and they expect you to be right on such things!

    7. James Lawrence says:

      Super Jocelyn, thanks, that’s a helpful way to remember, the he/him (she/her? 😉 trick. I usually puzzle it out in a similar way but your tip makes it a lot quicker.

    8. James Lawrence says:

      Another thought: If the rock group Who was involved, it could get complicated.
      To whom in The Who should we ask whom to send the money to before they ask us who got the money in the first place?

      yikes

      1. AutoCrit says:

        I don’t know, but hopefully we Won’t Get Fooled Again.

        Sorry…bad The Who humor.

    9. Rita Durrett says:

      I use who and let autocrit correct me if I’m wrong. lol

      1. AutoCrit says:

        That’s the spirit!

    10. David Kilner says:

      I avoid ‘whom’ because it sounds terribly poncy except in rare sentences such as ‘To whom it may concern’

      1. AutoCrit says:

        Context can be everything!

    11. Dawn says:

      I cannot remember the last time I used whom or, come to think of it, when I last read it in a novel. Certainly, no one ever uses it anymore in normal speech in my presence. I think the latter is an indication of a word being outdated.

      1. AutoCrit says:

        There is definitely an evolution of language, that’s for sure.

    12. I think there’s only a small population of us that think it matters, unfortunately. How can you argue with the Oxford dictionary?!

      1. AutoCrit says:

        I can’t, that’s for sure! 🙂

    Leave a Reply

    Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *

    This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.